Camping in Cobram!

DING DING the toaster went off so I knew breakfast was ready Eliza was up and everyone was making and eating toast and sipping tea.

Later that day we went for a swim I jumped in the outside pool and Eliza asked a girl called Anika to play with us.

For the rest of the day we swam and bought lollies, we also went go carting and we got to have a double one and a single go cart we went around the whole holiday park! My favourite place was the huge jumping pillow.

This was the greatest holiday ever!

3 comments

  1. You didn’t really put much detail in.
    I didn’t get the bit where you said they were making and eating toast.
    I liked how you put diffrent things in.

  2. I loved reading your recount although there was a fewer full stops.
    One of the most enjoyable sentices was your sizzling start.
    Maybe you could have done it about one subject for example do a recount just about the thing you enjoyed most in your holiday.
    I really enjoyed your recount I’m excited to see what you do next!
    From Indiana

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